There has been vast improvement to the social accounts linked with the foundation. These mediums are powerful tools that can reach far beyond those of spoken word and will continue the movement. Just some positive feedback on things I found that will improve the website and help make viewing easier. The home page is filled with a great biography on Asia and what the foundation is doing, but I found it a little to wordy and not pleasing to the viewing eye. I suggest the homepage has key points but should be limited with words. The biography can be placed on a separate page.Also the Twitter account is not working from the link provided so I don't know if there was a mistake with the typing but it doesn't work. With most websites you want to decorate it with pictures and sprinkle facts around them to catch the eye of the viewer. Overall the website is good , but I would like to see more multimedia present on the page in the future .
I think that its great idea that you have mltiple different ways to promote your foundation. Its mission etc. However I think that the website is a bit wordy. I totally agree with Jordan when he says that maybe you may want to consider cutting out a few words just because most times people are either too lasy to read and sometimes too many words can deter a person from really understanding your purpose and your mission. Maybe throwing in a few more pictures just to spice it up a bit. Also I had a really hard time getting to you're website from a PC. I could only view your websit on my phone. You may just want to look into why that mayne happening. Cause of course you don't want it to be a project to view the blog. Last but not least maybe you can have people write their testimonies and experiences working with the foundation. Then you could post them directly on the website. It would just be nice and interesting to see the accomplishments that have been made through working with the foundation. Overall, I think the blog and the facebook page is a great idea and you've done a wonderful job. Goodluck with the future of your foundation.
There has been vast improvement to the social accounts linked with the foundation. These mediums are powerful tools that can reach far beyond those of spoken word and will continue the movement. Just some positive feedback on things I found that will improve the website and help make viewing easier. The home page is filled with a great biography on Asia and what the foundation is doing, but I found it a little to wordy and not pleasing to the viewing eye. I suggest the homepage has key points but should be limited with words. The biography can be placed on a separate page.Also the Twitter account is not working from the link provided so I don't know if there was a mistake with the typing but it doesn't work. With most websites you want to decorate it with pictures and sprinkle facts around them to catch the eye of the viewer. Overall the website is good , but I would like to see more multimedia present on the page in the future .
ReplyDeleteI think that its great idea that you have mltiple different ways to promote your foundation. Its mission etc. However I think that the website is a bit wordy. I totally agree with Jordan when he says that maybe you may want to consider cutting out a few words just because most times people are either too lasy to read and sometimes too many words can deter a person from really understanding your purpose and your mission. Maybe throwing in a few more pictures just to spice it up a bit. Also I had a really hard time getting to you're website from a PC. I could only view your websit on my phone. You may just want to look into why that mayne happening. Cause of course you don't want it to be a project to view the blog. Last but not least maybe you can have people write their testimonies and experiences working with the foundation. Then you could post them directly on the website. It would just be nice and interesting to see the accomplishments that have been made through working with the foundation. Overall, I think the blog and the facebook page is a great idea and you've done a wonderful job. Goodluck with the future of your foundation.
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